Comments on: Evening in Paris http://yareview.net/2010/01/evening-in-paris/ The YA Review Network Mon, 23 Aug 2010 17:51:57 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.1 hourly 1 By: Sarah Young http://yareview.net/2010/01/evening-in-paris/comment-page-1/#comment-27 Sarah Young Tue, 16 Feb 2010 23:01:02 +0000 http://yareview.net/wordpress/?p=208#comment-27 nicely done, suze!!!! i totally remember the perfume and powder set you're talking about, and even though i was just a silly kid i remember thinking the packaging was so fabulous!!! good thing i didn't get into it and break it or something, you know how i was/am :) nicely done, suze!!!! i totally remember the perfume and powder set you’re talking about, and even though i was just a silly kid i remember thinking the packaging was so fabulous!!! good thing i didn’t get into it and break it or something, you know how i was/am :)

]]> By: Mary Koester http://yareview.net/2010/01/evening-in-paris/comment-page-1/#comment-7 Mary Koester Tue, 02 Feb 2010 19:37:29 +0000 http://yareview.net/wordpress/?p=208#comment-7 Nice job!! Your writing puts me right there on the side of the mountain. The attitude is perfect for a teenage girl. I remember that "being stuck" feeling of attending family events when I was a teen, which was long ago. Universal theme! Nice job!! Your writing puts me right there on the side of the mountain. The attitude is perfect for a teenage girl. I remember that “being stuck” feeling of attending family events when I was a teen, which was long ago. Universal theme!

]]> By: "JG" Jan Godown Annino http://yareview.net/2010/01/evening-in-paris/comment-page-1/#comment-6 "JG" Jan Godown Annino Mon, 01 Feb 2010 21:52:54 +0000 http://yareview.net/wordpress/?p=208#comment-6 Yay, Susan! Vivid details. I like the Osh Kosh button fastener help & the circling back inside that brings her to her final reunion conversation that's such a key element of her growth. This is heart-felt & that shows through. Please be in touch some time when the kids give you a break! www.bookseedstudio.wordpress.com Yay, Susan!
Vivid details. I like the Osh Kosh button fastener help & the circling back inside that brings her to her final reunion conversation that’s such a key element of
her growth. This is heart-felt & that shows through. Please be in touch some time when the kids give you a break!

http://www.bookseedstudio.wordpress.com

]]> By: Kathy Simone http://yareview.net/2010/01/evening-in-paris/comment-page-1/#comment-5 Kathy Simone Sun, 31 Jan 2010 17:33:25 +0000 http://yareview.net/wordpress/?p=208#comment-5 Great writing, Susan! We've been to some of those family reunion events you've used as idea nuggets (with you!) and you nailed the setting, descriptions, and emotion! (but....where's donkey?!) Congratulations! Looking forward to reading your next publications! Great writing, Susan! We’ve been to some of those family reunion events you’ve used as idea nuggets (with you!) and you nailed the setting, descriptions, and emotion! (but….where’s donkey?!)

Congratulations! Looking forward to reading your next publications!

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