5 responses

  1. Andrew
    May 12, 2011

    I like this story, its funny and taps at the door of my heart.


  2. Stephen Schmutzer
    June 5, 2011

    This story was really good. It had humor and some drama. It was really bizzarre because it was like cirque du freak where they were preforming as a show. Overall it is good and i enjoyed reading it.


  3. Chris Azarian
    June 5, 2011

    I really like this story. It has all the aspects of a great sci-fi-ish theme such as aliens, morphing into swamp monsters. The thing I don’t like is, are the characters humans or another creature. It is kind of confusing. One part they are dolphins, and another swamp monsters. I don’t get it.


  4. Austin Brines
    June 6, 2011

    I really like this story. The descriptive language was really good throughout, ecspecially at the beginning. I really liked how the author wrote it and how they kept us interested to see what was coming next the whole time.


  5. Zack sawaged
    June 9, 2011

    I really like this story. When I was reading it I just kept wanting to know more and focused on the story completely. It has great imagery that really helps you be put in the place of the characters and there sourrondings. One thing was it was a bit of a cliche because it’s your average alien story. It was great anyway.


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