5 responses

  1. susan
    March 24, 2014

    I really loved the sense of suspense you created. I was totally riveted. Kind of scary….loved it!


  2. Olga
    April 2, 2014

    Great story. I didn’t want it to end. Loved the adventure and the character.


  3. Patti
    April 3, 2014

    Absolutely kept me riveted, you did an exceptional job and I felt like I was there


  4. Jenni
    April 7, 2014

    Great dialog! Jessi really knows how to build suspense. I didn’t want this story to end.


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