9 responses

  1. Linda
    December 14, 2017

    AWESOME Story!!!

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  2. V Palcios
    December 14, 2017

    So, soooo good!! Absolutely loved it! I wish it wouldn’t have finished…I wanted more!! ❤️ I’m so sad it ended…

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  3. Emily K. Martin
    January 4, 2018

    Very much enjoyed this piece. The YA voice is genuine, and the emotions and situation are well described. Even the title is a hook!

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  4. Sandra Scofield
    January 4, 2018

    This is a terrific story. Perfect voice, perfect pacing. I teach in an MFA program and I don’t see many stories this well done. This writer is going places. Congratulations!!

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  5. Laura McCaffrey
    January 26, 2018

    Sandra Scofield, so good to see you here. High praise from such an accomplished writer.

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  6. Jerry
    February 9, 2018

    This is a terrific story. Perfect voice, perfect pacing. I teach in an MFA program and I don’t see many stories this well done. This writer is going places. Congratulations!!

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  7. Jerry
    February 9, 2018

    Nice story.

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  8. Laura
    February 14, 2018

    Thanks so much everyone!

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  9. Alisha
    October 10, 2018

    This was heart-breaking and wonderful. And I love the narrative voice.

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